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At first I just had the main "construction", but it looked too empty so I added the rest of the construction, it was still too empty so I added the sand and the grass, I thought this was too boring so I added some water. This gave me the opportunity to test a water effect, any critique for the water animation is appreciated. :dummy:

It also my entry for the Twisty-motes Contest that's where I got the idea from in the first place. :boogie:

And since it has something blue in it, it will also be my entry for the July-EMTC - theme:blue :dummy:
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:iconkath602:
Kath602 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
That water effect is so perfect, you done a great job with making everything loop together also! :clap:
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Krissi001 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
thank you so much :heart: :happybounce:
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guitarcraze Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The water animation is really awesome, probably the best I have ever seen done in pixels. Though I do have to agree with =Wooded-Wolf on the timing of it.

Aside from that you've been doing a super job with the grass. I love how the colors in your artwork have become subtle, not too bright. And you use a lot of them so it's never boring. The shading is also top notch for just about everything you make. Keep up the amazing work. :)
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Krissi001 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
I will work on it when the contest has ended and when the winners have been announced. :boogie:
Thank you very much! :tighthug:
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guitarcraze Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sounds good.
And you're welcome. :)
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crysanthemum963 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
This is just so fabulous...I dunno what else to say xD.
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:iconkrissi001:
Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
thank you! :happybounce:
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:iconcrysanthemum963:
crysanthemum963 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
:) You're welcome~
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BassMessiah Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This looks great, but is it just me, or is the jumping one looking a little bit mischievous when he bounces on blue? :dummy:
Furthermore, relating to your text, that kept adding details to the image just makes it more awesome, it is really fun to keep watching and notice one fine detail after another. For example it didn't notice you even thought of the grass when orange(?) is turning around the pole, quiet amazing :)

Since i have tried to animate water once before (you didn't know? Yeah, because i keep my failures secret :la:) i admit that you did a reeeeally good job :)
*sorry for switching to german, can't explain that good in english * Da du nach Kritik gefragt hast, ich finde im Moment sieht es eher danach aus, als würde eine Welle über die nächste brausen, vielleicht wäre es besser, wenn der Schaum im Blickfeld bleibt und sich der Wellenbewegung nach vor uns zurück bewegt? Und vielleicht hilft eine zweite Animationsschleife für das Wasser, in der ein paar Formen anders sind, es eher nach einer Flüssigkeit aussehen zu lassen? Wie gesagt, meine Erfahrungen auf dem Gebiet haben noch zu nichts geführt, aber eventuell hilft es ja doch :P



And by the way, i adore the way the blue one smiles, looks so adorable stupid :D
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Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
he looks a bit evil when he jumps on him :nod:  I am glad you noticed it!
Thank you very much!

Ich werde nach dem Contest nochmal daran arbeiten! Danke für die vorschläge! :boogie:
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clmckenzie71 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
These are really neat. Awesome job! Where or how do I download these where they kp the animation?
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Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
Thanks!  I don't know what you mean with "kp the animation" 
This is a Visual purpose Emote, which means the only purpose of this Emote is to look at it. :la:
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lucky7number7seven7 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That emote just keeps on smiling,even though he's being used as a mat!
(The water animating is very smooth and lifelike, though there shouldn't be that strong of a seam between the waves,water is a flowing liquid and can't be received as simply two layers.)
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Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
I used this www.youtube.com/watch?v=qREKP9... as some sort of reference but it didn't help me that much, I just couldn't get it right. D:
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lucky7number7seven7 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Maybe you could try having them sort of come in a different way next time, or have different timing for the waves. (Forgive me if this advise isn't that good, I'm not an animator).
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Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
I will try it when the contest ended c:
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lucky7number7seven7 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*advice.
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gevageva Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i love how bouncy the blue emote is :3
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:iconkrissi001:
Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
thanks c:
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:iconsparklydest:
SparklyDest Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
The water animation is really nice. :nod:

Blue emote is so bouncy!!
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:iconkrissi001:
Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
thanks :happybounce:
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:iconminato-kushina:
Minato-Kushina Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
The water is just amazing!! :love:
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Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
thank you :huggle:
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silverhammer Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Süß :giggle:
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:iconkrissi001:
Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
Danke :love:
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sugarislife28 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:giggle: this is amusing!
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:iconkrissi001:
Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
thanks :giggle:
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sugarislife28 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
welcome ^_^
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:iconfixmeknow:
FixMeKnow Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
It looks awesome!
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:iconkrissi001:
Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
Thank you :heart:
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Wooded-Wolf Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
It reminds me of part of the first zone in Sonic Heroes. I love the water animation, but since you've asked for a critique, I feel that there could be more of a delay after the water recedes for the next wave to come. It looks amazing, regardless :clap:
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Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
Never played/seen it. :lol:    I will work on it when the contests ended. :eager:(Since I also wait until a contest ends before I write a critique :paranoid:)
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Wooded-Wolf Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
Sonic the Hedgehog is awesome
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vveste Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
I love it! the water animation is really very well done, especially the detail how the sand gets wet from the water :)
But I fell the water stil looks a little bit flat, maybe one could add a little bit of white reflection to the water?
Und verspätete Glückwünsche zu deinem Emoticon-Geburstag :D
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Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
I will work on it when the contest ended. :boogie: thanks for the suggestion!

Danke! :giggle:
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Shasiel Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
hehehe, the blue guy doesn't mind getting jumped on..
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Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
:giggle:
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CJ-DB Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013   Traditional Artist
Nice job :)
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Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
thank you :boogie:
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:iconthewritingdragon:
TheWritingDragon Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
very smooth animation, very cute! :D
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Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
thanks c:
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TanteTabata Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
Sorry, but I can't critisize the water effect
because it works veeery well! :nod:
So if I had to give critics on this it would sound something like:
I'm jealous - but don't tell the others! ;)

Cute and funny idea and a really smooth animation! :clap:
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Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
thank you very much :heart:
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MiningForDegus Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
o3o nice detail and nice background
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:iconkrissi001:
Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
thank you :love:
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:iconpegacorngem12:
pegacorngem12 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how the tard emote is like a trampoline :D
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Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
thanks ;D
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pegacorngem12 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem :)
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Mnjooschji Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Now, THAT'S what friends are for!
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Krissi001 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
:highfive:
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